George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 0:16:09 GMT
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Post by Pablo on Aug 1, 2010 0:42:13 GMT
3.39 4th try.
Excellent editing for your first level. Very few people make such a good first impression on me! However, the main idea of the level, pathway finding, is useless because both paths are identical.
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Post by IsraeliRD on Aug 1, 2010 0:46:23 GMT
Since when are you a good player?
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 0:51:39 GMT
However, the main idea of the level, pathway finding, is useless because both paths are identical. You are right, but people could decide to get the time mod first. And also, thanks for the thumbs up! I'm still trying to beat 3.47
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Post by Pablo on Aug 1, 2010 0:53:17 GMT
I think the time mod first is way worse.
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 1:05:54 GMT
agreed
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Post by Aaron Y on Aug 1, 2010 1:29:44 GMT
Great level for a first! 3.26 3rd try mahahaha Pablo
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Post by Pablo on Aug 1, 2010 1:58:47 GMT
3.11 5th try!!!
3.25 too.
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Post by Imperial on Aug 1, 2010 2:09:11 GMT
Nice level, George. The level is well edited but it kinda lacks replayability. Anyway, 3.07 here.
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Post by nobody on Aug 1, 2010 2:25:12 GMT
noob. 3.31 2nd try. -- very good first level!
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Post by Pablo on Aug 1, 2010 2:29:53 GMT
Are you kidding? This is the most replayable level I've played in months! (Besides PQ.)
I got a 3.07 too.
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Post by Aaron Y on Aug 1, 2010 2:49:33 GMT
I give up
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Post by Imperial on Aug 1, 2010 2:50:06 GMT
Are you kidding? This is the most replayable level I've played in months! (Besides PQ.) Sorry but I kinda hate levels that just require the best TM catch.
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 3:34:32 GMT
The level is well edited but it kinda lacks replayability. It's my first one lol and i will try to make better ones. Thanks for the feedback. BTW has anyone got under 3?
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 3:39:55 GMT
Hey guys! New level here! I worked on it for a few hours. It's probably not as good as the last one but thats for you guys to decide! Enjoy! Three Floors www.mediafire.com/?bmauugbho7xs606
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Post by Imperial on Aug 1, 2010 4:48:26 GMT
Wow you made another level already. Anyway, nice short level. My best is 3.81s. Keep it up! EDIT: Forgot to mention, maybe you can try making levels longer and not having the players to get the best TM catch.
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 5:07:16 GMT
Thanks Imperial I'll be sure to take note of that. I just worked on both maps from about 3PM to 9PM so I got them done quickly. The next one wont be out soon because I will make it longer and not make the TM catch thing.
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Post by [DWARF] RDs.empire on Aug 1, 2010 10:53:34 GMT
Nice levels Tip put all links in you first post using modify button
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Post by Pablo on Aug 1, 2010 11:07:42 GMT
Another nice level, but finish pad is sunken and rotated the wrong way. 4.09 is my best.
You might want to make some longer levels now that you know the basics. It usually helps to draw them on paper first.
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Post by Aaron Y on Aug 1, 2010 12:54:44 GMT
It usually helps to draw them on paper first. I confuse myself when I do that because I'm so bad at drawing. I have the ideas in my head most of the time(guess that's why I fail at level ideas ). On another note, another nice small level!
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Post by narvoxx on Aug 1, 2010 13:06:46 GMT
It usually helps to draw them on paper first. This, much. If it's a small level you can keep it in your head, but even then drawing it out will give you a better overview, sometimes allowing for minor improvements or genius ideas (UT/PT/GT path tweaks / prevents), and prevent you from starting a level that are still missing parts in your head, and ending up with a broken level.
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 16:29:34 GMT
Another nice level, but finish pad is sunken and rotated the wrong way. You might want to make some longer levels now that you know the basics. It usually helps to draw them on paper first. Oops, the only thing I noticed was the finish pad sunken And I am working on a longer level and it wont be out soon because I really want to make it good! BTW 4.07
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 16:34:42 GMT
Tip put all links in you first post using modify button I will every five levels because otherwise it would be confusing which one people are liking
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Post by Andrew on Aug 1, 2010 19:11:09 GMT
The name "Platformation" was already used for a custom level, please change it.
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 20:03:02 GMT
Hey guys new level! I accidentally named it after an already created level so I had to reupload it. Anyways, this level is of medium length and has no TM catch IMPERIAL, and I hope you guys like it! Platform Rise www.mediafire.com/?16462k00e12p2mcUpdated 3rd time lol BTW thanks Andrew
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Post by Pablo on Aug 1, 2010 20:12:50 GMT
-1 for having the wrong interior name, and spelling it wrong at that
The beginning is just like Three Floors's. You need to have a way smaller IBT. Layout is confusing and could use some signs. Use mbu_edge_white1 for trim on a slope, so you don't have those thick blue lines.
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George
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Post by George on Aug 1, 2010 20:43:03 GMT
-1 for having the wrong interior name, and spelling it wrong at that The beginning is just like Three Floors's. You need to have a way smaller IBT. Layout is confusing and could use some signs. Use mbu_edge_white1 for trim on a slope, so you don't have those thick blue lines. I renamed the stuff correctly and I will re-upload it a third time. Next time I will use signs. Thanks
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Post by Imperial on Aug 2, 2010 2:32:09 GMT
This level is better. It's good for path-finding and fun to play. But, like Pablo said, signs can be added. My best is 8.28.
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Post by xnanux1 on Aug 2, 2010 3:43:52 GMT
Best is 9.03, great level.
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George
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Post by George on Aug 2, 2010 18:53:16 GMT
NEW LEVEL HERE!!! I worked on the interior for a day and made the mission itself today so I hope yo guys like it. I finally learned how to make bumps and stuff from watching cybefox's video, so I give MOB (Method of Building) credit to him. It's another medium-ish level where the category is to just have fun! Enjoy! Wavering www.mediafire.com/?9mke9vd5eerxavv
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